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Wooeee I liked this, I included it in my Ren'Py Jam part 4 video, i hope you don't mind!

This game has a weird plot, is glitched, rather short and based on not-your art (just few pictures form Internet and characters from asset store. I've played better indie games, to be honest. Maybe you should learn a little bit more about few aspect of creating visual novels and find at least one person (maybe artist, writer...) to help before creating next game. 

I tried your game, but it gave  me this error

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/script.rpy", line 98, in script
    sup 'Hello, [pol]. I\'m really hungry. And I need to buy some food.'
KeyError: u'pol'

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/script.rpy", line 98, in script
    sup 'Hello, [pol]. I\'m really hungry. And I need to buy some food.'
  File "F:\nobody-is-perfect\Nbdisperfect-1.0-pc\renpy\", line 678, in execute
    renpy.exports.say(who, what, interact=self.interact, *args, **kwargs)
  File "F:\nobody-is-perfect\Nbdisperfect-1.0-pc\renpy\", line 1203, in say
    who(what, *args, **kwargs)
  File "F:\nobody-is-perfect\Nbdisperfect-1.0-pc\renpy\", line 1014, in __call__
    what = what_pattern.replace("[what]", sub(what, translate=True))
  File "F:\nobody-is-perfect\Nbdisperfect-1.0-pc\renpy\", line 1003, in sub
    return renpy.substitutions.substitute(s, scope=scope, force=force, translate=translate)[0]
  File "F:\nobody-is-perfect\Nbdisperfect-1.0-pc\renpy\", line 244, in substitute
    s = formatter.vformat(s, (), kwargs)
  File "/home/tom/ab/x64lucid-deps/install/lib/python2.7/", line 563, in vformat
  File "/home/tom/ab/x64lucid-deps/install/lib/python2.7/", line 585, in _vformat
  File "/home/tom/ab/x64lucid-deps/install/lib/python2.7/", line 646, in get_field
  File "/home/tom/ab/x64lucid-deps/install/lib/python2.7/", line 605, in get_value
KeyError: u'pol'

Nbdisperfect 1.0
Sun Oct 14 20:34:14 2018

Hope it helps you improve :D

Thank you. I know about it but I had no time to fix it. Sorry. I will.

Wow !!! I'm just crazy about this game ! It's so amazing ! I love the fact we can choose the sex and the character (so the sexual preferences too) ! And the end is so… is so… Oh no, I note have the word too describe it… It's not sad, but is… Is Something like that, or more… The end is pretty amazing.
Even It's your first game, it is great ! Good job ! ^^ 

A person who want to job in the video games, in the future. 

Ps : sorry for my English. I'm french student… ^^'

Thank you!